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Nebu Nekhbet/ DUAT Unit-01: RA
« on: October 14, 2016, 07:59:03 PM »
CHARACTER

Name: Nebu Nekhbet

Age: 23

Species and Gender: Female Human

Symbol: The profile of her helmet

Occupation: SET operative: DUAT unit 01- RA

Appearance: Nebu is a well build 5’5” woman, moderately curvy, but nonetheless strong. She carries herself as though she were the most important person in the room, her piercing indigo eyes always watching to see if whomever is around is paying attention. Her similarly indigo hair is short, cut into a messy bob that is higher on the left side compared to the right, which stops at her shoulder. Her skin is a light tan, and she has a single tattoo on her cheek in the shape of a small circuit path.

In public, she is often seen in the soft layer of her suit with a gold and white cutoff jacket, golden scarf, and a waist sash hastily thrown over it. Said scarf is also often worn above the RA suit.

Rho projects herself as a slender, golden woman with long hair and a flowing dress covered in circuitry patterns. Similarly to her sister pseudo-AI, Phi, she wears a visor similar to that of her handler’s suit.

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History: As long as Nebu could remember, she had wanted to be a Specialist. These particular individuals were the best of the best, said to be capable of matching the most skilled of huntsmen and huntresses, and all loyal to their kingdom. Becoming one was an honor in and of itself, and just to think of all of the stories she could tell…

The minute she was able, Nebu begged her parents to enroll her into the combat academy system. The basic academy was appropriately challenging for her, but in it she learned that people will respect you if you are worthy of it. So she carried herself like she was worthy of everyone’s attention. She did well in Battalion, and eventually made her way to Atlas’ Advanced Combat Academy.

Atlas was not a school for the weak hearted. Nebu struggled in her first year at the school of her dreams, and her valiant efforts to close the gap in ability with her fellow students resulted in disappointment. At this rate, she would never become a specialist. She would never be the hero that she dreamed she could be…

The tail end of her first year went by too quickly for her to care. She knew she needed an edge, but with her crappy semblance, lacking weaponry, and overall glass cannon fighting style, she couldn’t excel. Desperate to find an edge, the girl turned to performance enhancing drugs. For a while, she started to do better in her combat exercises. Unfortunately, it didn’t take long for her to get caught. Her punishment was swift and harsh, she was expelled from the school and permanently removed from the Specialist program effective immediately.

Nebu was devastated, and well aware that it was her own actions that caused this. After her expulsion, she stayed home, refusing to interact with anyone as she pondered what to do.

The answer came quickly as a message from an organization that went by the name of Special Enhancement Technologies. For whatever reason, she had been selected from a number of candidates to test a series of suits of body armor. Seeing as she had nothing in the way of money, and desperately needed something to do with her life, she accepted, and was quickly sent the coordinates to SET labs, as well as a pass to enter without getting shot.

What she found was an organization hard at work at designing advanced mass production body armor for soldiers and guards, calling their project by the name of DUAT. These units were each set up with the quickly spreading hardlight technology in order to form weapons, allowing the user to create weapons on the fly. Supposedly, she was chosen to pilot a prototype by the codename ANUBIS. However, the day she went in to begin preliminary testing, the suit’s AI had been stolen, rendering the prototype useless until SET could bypass the need for one. Sadly, all attempts were deemed irrelevant as two weeks later, ANUBIS was stolen as well. As a result, Nebu was granted access to RA, and it’s paired pseudo AI, Rho. As the third project, SEKHMET had been experiencing technical difficulties, Nebu carried the weight of SET on her shoulders, doing her level best to perform with the suit and further the DUAT project. After a series of adjustments over the course of four years, RA was deemed complete, and production began.

In the time it took for the DUAT project to begin mass production of the RA unit, Nebu was given a new directive. Juno Vert's participation in the Vytal Festeval Tournament showcased both ANUBIS and Phi to the world far earlier than SET had anticipated. While the organization was previously content with watching and collecting combat data of Juno and Phi from afar, growing interest in the AI meant a threat to their unknowing subjects. As a result, Nebu was tasked with protection of Juno, ensuring that the boy was kept alive and Phi on his person.

As of yet, Juno is unaware of her presence, let alone the existence of more suits.

Personality: Nebu is a leader in every sense of the word. Every syllable that comes out of her mouth carries weight and purpose, and she does not take kindly to interruptions of any sort. She is tactical, objective driven, and attempts to maintain a professional air about her. However, she is as insecure as all get out. She is well aware that the only reason she resembles anything similar to a success is that she is involved in a dubiously legal and ethical project that gave her a super suit and a soul in a box. Yet despite the less than moral practices that SET employs, she sincerely believes that the ends will justify the means.

Nebu also has issues with guilt, as her own actions led to her expulsion at Atlas. As a result, she is quick to find an excuse as to why something happened the way that it did, and takes being left with no excuse about as well as she does failure in and of itself.

During most fights, she is eerily silent, giving the impression of a mechanical beast hunting its prey.

Rho is caring, motherly, and constantly worried about her handler. She abuses her bodily scanning abilities to check on Nebu’s health, giving her advice on anything and everything that could help Nebu perform better in the field. She is also incredibly proud of how far her handler has come since their introduction, and is very prone to bragging. About everything.

Aura and Semblance: Flash: It’s shit. No applications other than being a living flashlight, and is so pitiful that it doesn't affect her aura or physical energy whatsoever. Instead, she uses her skill in aura to hit and run, boosting her already notable physical prowess to maneuver quickly around the field and hit like a goddamn truck.

Said Aura glows a radiant gold color

Combat Behavior: Nebu is fast. Very fast. As a result, she makes great use of her speed during combat, outmaneuvering her opponents and hitting very, very hard. Her RA suit’s booster jets and constructs play a heavy role in her fighting style, which relies on heavily. Her hand to hand style is quite reminiscent of a combination of Muay Thai and Tae Kwon Do, relying on kicks for her more powerful and jarring strikes.

However, she is no slouch with her constructs, using her Hatchet to disarm opponents and finish brutal combos and her Khopesh for fast, efficient strikes. Her suit also utilizes disks which have a heightened ability to track targets compared to the other SET units. Despite all of this fantastic speed and technology, however, she has difficulty escaping grabs and combinations, and relies far too much on her jets.

WEAPON

Name: Mk-05 RA Class Powered Armor

Primary Form: A suit of powered armor, built by SET: Special Enhancement Technologies, a subset of Atlesian R&D. The actual suit itself consists of two layers. The first layer, also known as the “soft layer”, is predominantly kevlar and circuitry, with a single flexible plate over the midsection. The second layer, or hard layer, is made mostly of a lightweight but durable titanium alloy. The RA unit also carries with it an angular collapsible helmet with a golden polycarbonate visor. As a result, the suit weighs roughly 100 lbs. To compensate for this, the suit utilizes a hydraulic dampening system to lessen the pressure and weight put on Nebu’s body, allowing her to move comfortably on the battlefield. However, this system does not enhance her movement speed or strength in any way. The RA suit is powered by a rechargeable dust-based power cell, which is capable of keep the suit running for up to six hours straight on a full charge. The power cells are placed on an armored case on her right leg, and she can carry up to six of them at one time.

This suit is augmented with a series of booster jets on the torso, calves, thighs,  forearms, and upper arms, which utilize propulsion dust in order to offer quick bursts of speed and changes in momentum. However, the suit's main draw is the dust-based hardlight generator mounted on the small of his back. This generator is able to create weapon constructs from pre-fabricated templates. Due to the complexity of the process of template creation, as well as the immense amount of storage that each file takes up, Nebu currently has three constructs she can use in combat, but she and Rho are hard at work at increasing that number. Said constructs are a 3-foot single-edged Khopesh, a razor sharp disk with a diameter of ten inches, and a hatchet. These constructs can only be created within the direct vicinity of the suit, but have a range of 75 feet before they cease to be maintained by the generator. Nebu can utilize four constructs at a time, in any combination. However, as the suit usually requires a ten second cooldown to refresh the system after deconstruction of any given construct, she and Rho developed a way to rectify that with the Reconfigure protocol. Reconfiguration allowes Nebu one active construct slot, but said slot can switch between the different constructs that she uses by reconfiguring the hardlight that was already generated. Both in the standard case of construct use and the Reconfigure protocol, a slot can be active for a maximum of 2 minutes before it begins to dissipate.

Rho monitors the suit's hardlight generator and constructs, allowing Nebu to use them. She also runs checkups on the suit to ensure that it is working effectively, and assists in running the suit's heads up display, found on a visor linked to the suit that marks Nebu’s Aura, the Aura of those around her, and any problems that the suit may be facing. The suit will lock all weapon systems without Rho present, so if she were to ever be removed from the suit, the major draw of the armor would be gone.

Known Constructs:
Khopesh
Hatchet
Razor Disk

Secondary Form: N/A

Dust Functions: RA utilizes six rechargeable dust cells in order to power it and the hardlight generator. The type of dust used in these cells does not affect how the suit performs.

History:

WEAPON 2

Name: Ravager pistols

Primary Form: A pair of standard Atlesian military sidearm pistols, which fire golden energy rounds up to a kilometer away. These pistols run on dust cells similar to the ones found in RA.

Secondary Form: N/A

Dust Functions: The Ravager pistols utilizes dust cells as a source of power, but are in no way affected by the type of dust used in these cells.

History: Nebu was granted these sidearms upon her induction into SET. She allowed Rho to name them and has kept them ever since.
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Re: Nebu Nekhbet/ DUAT Unit-01: RA
« Reply #1 on: October 14, 2016, 08:47:01 PM »
Before you bring up the AI thing, most of the background for this was okayed by Gus and I as part of a... thing.

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Re: Nebu Nekhbet/ DUAT Unit-01: RA
« Reply #2 on: October 16, 2016, 05:10:49 PM »
There's a little thing near the end of the weapon description:
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a visor linked to the suit that marks Nebu’s Aura, the Aura of those around him
I'm not sure that was intentional, but you said Nebu was a he.

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Re: Nebu Nekhbet/ DUAT Unit-01: RA
« Reply #3 on: October 17, 2016, 02:44:31 AM »
Approved since Vox and gus checked over the tech stuff.
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Re: Nebu Nekhbet/ DUAT Unit-01: RA
« Reply #4 on: July 08, 2017, 01:32:20 PM »
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CHARACTER

Name: Nebu Nekhbet

Age: 23

Species and Gender: Female Human

Symbol: The profile of her helmet

Occupation: SET operative: DUAT unit 01- RA

Appearance: Nebu is a well build 5’5” woman, moderately curvy, but nonetheless strong. She carries herself as though she were the most important person in the room, her piercing indigo eyes always watching to see if whomever is around is paying attention. Her similarly indigo hair is short, cut into a messy bob that is higher on the left side compared to the right, which stops at her shoulder. Her skin is a light tan, and she has a single tattoo on her cheek in the shape of a small circuit path.

In public, she is often seen in the soft layer of her suit with a gold and white cutoff jacket, golden scarf, and a waist sash hastily thrown over it. Said scarf is also often worn above the RA suit.

Rho projects herself as a slender, golden woman with long hair and a flowing dress covered in circuitry patterns. Similarly to her sister pseudo-AI, Phi, she wears a visor similar to that of her handler’s suit.

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History: As long as Nebu could remember, she had wanted to be a Specialist. These particular individuals were the best of the best, said to be capable of matching the most skilled of huntsmen and huntresses, and all loyal to their kingdom. Becoming one was an honor in and of itself, and just to think of all of the stories she could tell…

The minute she was able, Nebu begged her parents to enroll her into the combat academy system. The basic academy was appropriately challenging for her, but in it she learned that people will respect you if you are worthy of it. So she carried herself like she was worthy of everyone’s attention. She did well in Battalion, and eventually made her way to Atlas’ Advanced Combat Academy.

Atlas was not a school for the weak hearted. Nebu struggled in her first year at the school of her dreams, and her valiant efforts to close the gap in ability with her fellow students resulted in disappointment. At this rate, she would never become a specialist. She would never be the hero that she dreamed she could be…

The tail end of her first year went by too quickly for her to care. She knew she needed an edge, but with her crappy semblance, lacking weaponry, and overall glass cannon fighting style, she couldn’t excel. Desperate to find an edge, the girl turned to performance enhancing drugs. For a while, she started to do better in her combat exercises. Unfortunately, it didn’t take long for her to get caught. Her punishment was swift and harsh, she was expelled from the school and permanently removed from the Specialist program effective immediately.

Nebu was devastated, and well aware that it was her own actions that caused this. After her expulsion, she stayed home, refusing to interact with anyone as she pondered what to do.

The answer came quickly as a message from an organization that went by the name of Special Enhancement Technologies. For whatever reason, she had been selected from a number of candidates to test a series of suits of body armor. Seeing as she had nothing in the way of money, and desperately needed something to do with her life, she accepted, and was quickly sent the coordinates to SET labs, as well as a pass to enter without getting shot.

What she found was an organization hard at work at designing advanced mass production body armor for soldiers and guards, calling their project by the name of DUAT. These units were each set up with the quickly spreading hardlight technology in order to form weapons, allowing the user to create weapons on the fly. Supposedly, she was chosen to pilot a prototype by the codename ANUBIS. However, the day she went in to begin preliminary testing, the suit’s AI had been stolen, rendering the prototype useless until SET could bypass the need for one. Sadly, all attempts were deemed irrelevant as two weeks later, ANUBIS was stolen as well. As a result, Nebu was granted access to RA, and it’s paired pseudo AI, Rho. As the third project, SEKHMET had been experiencing technical difficulties, Nebu carried the weight of SET on her shoulders, doing her level best to perform with the suit and further the DUAT project. After a series of adjustments over the course of four years, RA was deemed complete, and production began.

In the time it took for the DUAT project to begin mass production of the RA unit, ANUBIS and Phi had been found, wielded by a first year at Beacon. In light of this tip given by an outside assistant to the project, a Mr. Leonard Princely, Nebu and the two current DUAT units, Rumaadi Shu and Sulb Khonsu were deployed to Vale to intercept the man who stole ANUBIS.

Personality: Nebu is a leader in every sense of the word. Every syllable that comes out of her mouth carries weight and purpose, and she does not take kindly to interruptions of any sort. She is tactical, objective driven, and attempts to maintain a professional air about her. However, she is as insecure as all get out. She is well aware that the only reason she resembles anything similar to a success is that she is involved in a dubiously legal and ethical project that gave her a super suit and a soul in a box. Yet despite the less than moral practices that SET employs, she sincerely believes that the ends will justify the means.

Nebu also has issues with guilt, as her own actions led to her expulsion at Atlas. As a result, she is quick to find an excuse as to why something happened the way that it did, and takes being left with no excuse about as well as she does failure in and of itself.

During most fights, she is eerily silent, giving the impression of a mechanical beast hunting its prey.

Rho is caring, motherly, and constantly worried about her handler. She abuses her bodily scanning abilities to check on Nebu’s health, giving her advice on anything and everything that could help Nebu perform better in the field. She is also incredibly proud of how far her handler has come since their introduction, and is very prone to bragging. About everything.

Aura and Semblance: Flash: It’s shit. No applications other than being a living flashlight, and is so pitiful that it doesn't affect her aura or physical energy whatsoever. Instead, she uses her skill in aura to hit and run, boosting her already notable physical prowess to maneuver quickly around the field and hit like a goddamn truck.

Said Aura glows a radiant gold color

Combat Behavior: Nebu is fast. Very fast. As a result, she makes great use of her speed during combat, outmaneuvering her opponents and hitting very, very hard. Her RA suit’s booster jets and constructs play a heavy role in her fighting style, which relies on heavily. Her hand to hand style is quite reminiscent of a combination of Muay Thai and Tae Kwon Do, relying on kicks for her more powerful and jarring strikes.

However, she is no slouch with her constructs, using her Hatchet to disarm opponents and finish brutal combos and her Khopesh for fast, efficient strikes. Her suit also utilizes disks which have a heightened ability to track targets compared to the other SET units. Despite all of this fantastic speed and technology, however, she has difficulty escaping grabs and combinations, and relies far too much on her jets.

WEAPON

Name: Mk-05 RA Class Powered Armor

Primary Form: A suit of powered armor, built by SET: Special Enhancement Technologies, a subset of Atlesian R&D. The actual suit itself consists of two layers. The first layer, also known as the “soft layer”, is predominantly kevlar and circuitry, with a single flexible plate over the midsection. The second layer, or hard layer, is made mostly of a lightweight but durable titanium alloy. The RA unit also carries with it an angular collapsible helmet with a golden polycarbonate visor. As a result, the suit weighs roughly 100 lbs. To compensate for this, the suit utilizes a hydraulic dampening system to lessen the pressure and weight put on Nebu’s body, allowing her to move comfortably on the battlefield. However, this system does not enhance her movement speed or strength in any way. The RA suit is powered by a rechargeable dust-based power cell, which is capable of keep the suit running for up to six hours straight on a full charge. The power cells are placed on an armored case on her right leg, and she can carry up to six of them at one time.

This suit is augmented with a series of booster jets on the torso, calves, thighs,  forearms, and upper arms, which utilize propulsion dust in order to offer quick bursts of speed and changes in momentum. However, the suit's main draw is the dust-based hardlight generator mounted on the small of his back. This generator is able to create weapon constructs from pre-fabricated templates. Due to the complexity of the process of template creation, as well as the immense amount of storage that each file takes up, Nebu currently has three constructs she can use in combat, but she and Rho are hard at work at increasing that number. Said constructs are a 3-foot single-edged Khopesh, a razor sharp disk with a diameter of ten inches, and a hatchet. These constructs can only be created within the direct vicinity of the suit, but have a range of 150 feet before they cease to be maintained by the generator. Nebu can utilize four constructs at a time, in any combination. However, as the suit usually requires a ten second cooldown to refresh the system after deconstruction of any given construct, she and Rho developed a way to rectify that with the Reconfigure protocol. Reconfiguration allowes Nebu one active construct slot, but said slot can switch between the different constructs that she uses by reconfiguring the hardlight that was already generated. Both in the standard case of construct use and the Reconfigure protocol, a slot can be active for a maximum of 5 minutes before it begins to dissipate.

Rho monitors the suit's hardlight generator and constructs, allowing Nebu to use them. She also runs checkups on the suit to ensure that it is working effectively, and assists in running the suit's heads up display, found on a visor linked to the suit that marks Nebu’s Aura, the Aura of those around her, and any problems that the suit may be facing. The suit will lock all weapon systems without Rho present, so if she were to ever be removed from the suit, the major draw of the armor would be gone.

Known Constructs:
Khopesh
Hatchet
Razor Disk

Secondary Form: N/A

Dust Functions: RA utilizes six rechargeable dust cells in order to power it and the hardlight generator. The type of dust used in these cells does not affect how the suit performs.

History:

WEAPON 2

Name: Ravager pistols

Primary Form: A pair of standard Atlesian military sidearm pistols, which fire golden energy rounds up to a kilometer away. These pistols run on dust cells similar to the ones found in RA.

Secondary Form: N/A

Dust Functions: The Ravager pistols utilizes dust cells as a source of power, but are in no way affected by the type of dust used in these cells.

History: Nebu was granted these sidearms upon her induction into SET. She allowed Rho to name them and has kept them ever since.
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Re: Nebu Nekhbet/ DUAT Unit-01: RA
« Reply #5 on: July 08, 2017, 01:51:45 PM »
Gave RA the same balancing as ANUBIS, decreasing maximum range and time for constructs and slots, respectively

Amended her mission description at the tail end of her history
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