Author Topic: Joshua Schwarz (Ready for Approval)  (Read 776 times)

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Re: Joshua Schwarz (Ready for Approval)
« Reply #15 on: May 30, 2018, 11:05:55 AM »
I have put on a limit for my semblance, and i have added drawbacks as well.

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Re: Joshua Schwarz (Ready for Approval)
« Reply #16 on: June 05, 2018, 12:47:37 PM »
Sorry for the delay here....real life has been hectic this past week. Overall, I still think the semblance can use some more explanation, but I think it's decent enough to pass.

Approved 2 of 2. Happy RPing.
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