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Approved Characters / Re: Infrared Ray
« on: January 16, 2017, 08:49:35 PM »
Removed dust casting.
Specified 'that group' are former hunters.
Removed year skipping so she is two years older.
Changed her into a specialist in training.
Specified failed in year 4 grimm biology and history.
Changed longsword into just stun, freeze an arm and deal DPS.
Reaction is changed into a shoulder mounted rocket launcher.

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The Vale Region / Re: Boredom and Coffee[Open]
« on: January 14, 2017, 10:53:26 PM »
Sighed, Catalina prepared himself for fighting but tried to talk it out first. 'See, there's nothing against you guys. You could just wait it out and nothing would happen to you. I promise. Most of the crowd moved away to their own business, hopefully they are the clean-handed bosses. But the two threatening looking men seems unfazed while dodging the undercut. You should've researched the rules before you came, so you pretty much earned this.

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The Vale Region / Re: Boredom and Coffee[Open]
« on: January 11, 2017, 03:59:52 AM »
Hmm, their talk might probably be ciphered and stuff, and splitting would look suspicious when we went in together. How about we just call the police in the restroom. And just wait. We don't know them, but the police do. Try not to give away anything.
About half an hour finally pasted, and a group of them went into the room. Of course. Make the call?

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Approved Characters / Re: Infrared Ray
« on: January 06, 2017, 07:31:02 AM »
Removed the dumb weakness (vulnerable to thermography).
Removed living in Mountain Glenn.
Removed one year advantage in aura.
Changed Reaction.
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Primary Form: A bulky brick red rocket launcher with an tube length of 1.5 meters that can both smash people and fire unguided rockets. It dealt 20% damage to her when she tested it against herself without using her semblance and up to 40 if semblance is used to sent it exactly back.
 
Dust Functions: Kinetic dust were used to launch and timed with a fuse for fragmentation or high explosive heads. A very large amount of them is used and thus creates a recoil that harms her aura at about 30 percent per shot AND knocked her down if her semblance is not used(40 if semblance is used) taking her 20 to reload. She can bring 10 to 20 rockets with her and a cart had to be made for just that.
Rephrased the awkward sentence.

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Old Tournaments / Re: 1st Year Semi-Finals: Zabar V Juno [Limited: 2/8]
« on: January 02, 2017, 10:07:05 AM »
Catalina sat as close to the arena as possible. And holy shit, that flag cheering for Zabar is huge even all the way across. He wanted to find Nathan, or at least sit with him silently, he just have a natural liking for him and as opposed to that, dislike Jack for what seems to be manipulating the masses to hate Nathan more the necessary. Or maybe he is just a little anti-social. Cat don't know and don't quite care.

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Approved Characters / Re: Infrared Ray
« on: December 31, 2016, 10:08:43 PM »
Changed her age accordingly.

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Approved Characters / Re: Infrared Ray
« on: December 25, 2016, 02:10:10 AM »
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Its output can make the whole sword freeze over with thickness of about 1 centimeter, can heat up to 200 degrees Celsius and make a 30 cm radius fireball when it hit something, and current flow can paralyze upon hit for about 10 seconds and take out 5% aura (on another student) per second of contact.
Output specs done.

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Approved Characters / Re: Infrared Ray
« on: December 23, 2016, 07:42:25 AM »
Post edited. If any questions are unanswered please tell me.
As for the economic conditions of her family, I think I have Flynt in my defense.
Edits: Typos, and:
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She's a faunus and is again discrimated, but no one messed with her physically after she skipping her 4th and 5th years under large support from teachers which included those who don't like the faunus as a species too much but don't discriminate them.
She loved electromagnetism thanks to her name and wanted to create a coilgun as her weapon but failed horribly after taking a hint in maths from another teacher and still almost electrocuted herself along with her teammates. At school she were bullied for loving 'stupid magnets' since that incident (and slightly less for being a faunus),But the damage was done. It changed her as what she is now.
Timeline changed to make skipping more reasonable.
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Her aura glow is mainly red but with small but scannable amount of infrared by glowing in the same way regular colorful aura glows.
Tried to explain how infrared aura works.
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Primary Form: A bulky brick red large cannon with an optimized muzzle length of 1.5 meters that can both smash people and fire 10kg shells with a muzzle velocity of just under mach 1. It dealt 30% damage to her when she tested it against herself without using her semblance. A poor student took 40 after taking its full blunt right on in a sparring match.


Dust Functions: Kinetic dust used to launch were launched and timed with a fuse for sometimes fragmentation and the other times armor piercing shells. A very large amount of them is used and thus creates a recoil that harms her aura at about 30 percent per shot AND knocked her down if her semblance is not used taking her 15 seconds to recover and another 20 to reload. She can only bring 5 to 10 shells with her and a cart had to be made for just that.
Specified and changed stats.
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Linings of dust channels provides dust usage when triggered. They make the sword coats in in the dust so it catches fire/freezes/whatever the dust it uses.
Explained how dust are used in action.

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The Vale Region / Re: Bombs over Vale [Open]
« on: December 16, 2016, 09:36:36 PM »
Catalina overheard about that girl too. And can you guys not use the ladder truck? What if it over balanced? But he have no idea where to search either, and it's at least floor 4. He can't reach it, not even with his semblance. Time to make use of my dust..
Actually, no, I have a better idea.

He started to scoop away on the still huge pile of debris again, with his semblance, his hands, Take That!, whatever he have on hand, making him the only one seen working away on the ground. Even though he never really cared about being seen as a hero or not, this he knows is the right thing to do.
A while later he is lying on the ground, helpless to even move a finger, panting heavily. He was thinking of what to do to help the survivors. He can do that, but it would be even more tiring...

He thinks, 'the most easily helped should probably be the first to receive help, and the conscious are those.' He walked to one of the more painful-looking people, transformed his weapon, and pulled the trigger... And shot a stimpack round onto his body. The face of the wounded, from paled of fear and pain, turned into relieve. Then Cat worked his plan. He put his hand onto the back of the person's head, and chanted.

"For it is in passing that we achieve immortality. Through this, we become a paragon of virtue and glory to rise above all, infinite in distance and unbound by death." While placing a hand on the person's chest, "I release your soul, and by my shoulder protect thee."

Uh. You're good. Onto the others.

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I thought that would help the mood, Catalina murmured.
Wait... something's wrong; a sound echoed, then nothing changed. Whatever.

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Old Tournaments / Re: 1st Year Semi-Finals: Tenne V Nathan [Limited: 2/8]
« on: December 15, 2016, 06:31:36 AM »
Go Nathan!
Catalina cheered silently. Not that he cared about what will the others think if he shouted loudly, but rather he just liked to be that way. After all, he recognized him as a good rival and a one sided friend.

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The Vale Region / Re: Recovery ward (semi-open PM for invite)
« on: December 14, 2016, 11:15:43 PM »
Going here was a stupid idea, what couldn't go wrong after all? But he somehow got what he wanted.
The last words before Catalina left is 'I'll beat him.'

And I still don't like you Jack.

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Approved Characters / Re: Infrared Ray
« on: December 14, 2016, 11:06:09 PM »
She is also a one women deconstructor fleet whenever she has a strong opinion towards a subject.

Applied the other way around, beating her to a pulp is the worst way to tell her to get a hold of herself.

Her aura glow is mainly red but with small but scannable amount of infrared.



+Proficient melee range combat
+Rabbit faunus(Enhanced hearing and near perfect night vision)
+brick aura power(vague sense, slightly enhanced strength amd speed)



-Extremely vulnerable to thermography


Added these information and changed her to year 7.

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Approved Characters / Infrared Ray
« on: December 14, 2016, 08:47:26 AM »
CHARACTER


Name: Given name:Infrared, Surname:Ray


Age: 24


Species and Gender: Female rabbit faunus


Symbol: A silvery wave of arcs which subtends 5 degrees with a wavelength of 1 arc per 3 centimeters on a brick red background.


Occupation: 4th year Atlas student


Appearance: She doesn't really care about what she wears and only look for warmth and agility with her outfit. Usually she wears T-shirts figure is around 150cm tall with 75 cm around her waist. Her rabbit ears at the top of her head are obvious and provide sensitive hearing akin to average rabbit faunus. Her rabbit ears have white fur.


History: She was born in Atlas with an elder brother and a one-year younger sister, and is looked down upon just like the rest. But unlike most people her parents are not being forced to near-slavery but are rather well paid with a decent position as managers of a small group of other faunus in a faunus respected and safe-ish dust mine. She went there occasionally to mine dust to get some Lien for buying entertainment goods and services. She became slightly more masculine thanks to her almost all-male companions. But her relationship with her parents soured because they gave her a beating every time she came for no particular reason, and got especially hard ones after knowing that she received combat training under a certain group of former hunters. When she was 8, she finally realized that even in a faunus respected environment, a mine is still that dangerous after being trapped by a collapse with the aforementioned hunters. It was there and then she discovered her semblance when she had a rock crushing almost right on her poor ears but instead punched a small hole that allowed for breath. After a long discussion they trained her on spot to help
By shaking a loose piece of rock and launching it at the debris one at a time they carved their way with assistance from her friends as she now calls them out the first sight from her is a mix of fury, worry and joy from her parents. What happened when she returned home?
Well, she wished not to talk about. Nonetheless, her relationship with the group became better than ever and they trained her all her life in fighting.

At the age of 18 she applied(she wanted to at 17, but were stopped by her parents after a good talk and for good reasons) to the Atlas academy and got denied. The report card was signed by a male teacher who unsurprisingly looked after her later saying her fighting skills were more than capable for academy students of the same year but the writing tests were marginally failed. She worked much harder on her knowledges and combat skills ever since(with the side effects of becoming addicted to Remnant: the Game and plays it super often) and two years later she got accepted into the second year of Atlas.
She's a faunus and is again discriminated, but no one messed with her physically after she earned support from professors don't discriminate them.
She loved electromagnetism thanks to her name and wanted to create a coilgun as her weapon but failed horribly after taking a hint in maths from another teacher and still almost electrocuted herself along with her teammates. At school she were bullied for loving 'stupid magnets' since that incident (and slightly less for being a faunus),But the damage was done. It changed her as what she is now.
Under quite a lot of pressure which included people disturbing her family houses that got chased away with great difficulties and private threatening of withholding graduation, she enlisted in the Atlas Military under training to become specialists AND faunus equality promotion, doing dirty but borderline legal and safe(/slave) to PR work, and even then her promotion was withheld for one year by refusing twice and only agreed after talking to practically everyone she knew of.
Her latest mission is to dig up a blueprint for something that was lost in mountain Glenn during the breach of the city, which used obsolete but secret to outside Atlas tech.


Personality: Following the official and direct order from the military, she despises the White Fang and refuses to talk about them. Outside of work, she liked to be a know-it-all who is terminology insistent and always correct the others whenever she remembered one off the top of her head. She is also loves to deconstruct a subject when she has a strong opinion towards it.
In hindsight of her childhood experience, she loved to slap her friends' back in kindness but it had made her friends and (hopefully temporary) enemies alike because she usually made their aura flicker if she isn't controlling her strength.
Applied the other way around, beating her to a pulp is the worst way to tell her to get a hold of herself.
On studying, she focuses on subjects she liked and practically ignores the rest as a trauma of her failing to create a coilgun. This is a main reason for failing 4th year in grimm biology and history year once other than the one above.


Aura and Semblance:Her aura glow is mainly red but with small but scannable amount of infrared by glowing in the same way regular colorful aura glows.
Her semblance is to make flying object she recognizes visibly and wishes to, upon contact, fly back with the incoming speed at an angle of her choosing with 10 degrees of error. The expense of this is extra aura consumption and pain proportional to the original damage. Dust infusing makes the dust coats on the projectile with the dust effects. It also can't bounce off anything coated in aura.
The cost of aura in percentage is proportional to the change of kinetic energy required to bounce the way she wanted. When a rocket from reaction is bounced exactly back(or to any other directions for that matter) Infrared took 15% aura damage and can barely stand up immediately afterwards.
Combat Behavior: She is a glass cannon thanks to the costly semblance. As such, she’ll stay far and bombard her enemies at long range, or cut or bash them down at close range but had nothing in between. She also somewhat fear her semblance's pain and will actively avoid using it.


+Powerful long range firepower
+Proficient melee range combat
+Effective and useful semblance
+A few more years worth of training
+Rabbit faunus(Enhanced hearing and near perfect night vision)
+Aura vague sense


-Doesn't want to use her semblance too much
-Self damaging semblance
-Can't hit anything in between effective range of two weapons(where aim-dodging is easy but out of melee reach), which is quite a large gap
-Reaction and its shells are very bulky and is impossible to conceal
-Can't wield both weapons at once as they're both handheld
-slow even when not carrying reaction
-relatively fragile aura even without considering semblance
WEAPON


Name: She named it Reaction because of its huge muzzle energy and to pair to her other weapon.


Primary Form: A bulky brick red shoulder mounted rocket launcher with an tube length of 1.5 meters that can both smash people and fire unguided rockets. It dealt 20% damage to her when she tested it against herself without using her semblance and became 15 if semblance is used to sent it away due to cost of her semblance.
 
Dust Functions: Kinetic dust were used to launch and timed with a fuse for fragmentation or high explosive heads. It takes her 10 seconds to reload. She can bring 10 to 20 rockets with her and a cart had to be made for just that.

History: She decided bigger firepower is better when it came to firearms and made it as powerful as possible. Before it was finished she can only bash people around with the exterior and slash with her sidearm. It was only made possible after she enlisted into Atlas Military for usages on the field as fire support.

Name: Action.

Primary Form: A blue regular longsword with a one meter blade and wieldable with both one hand and two hands. A squeeze trigger activates the dust stored in the hollow handle.

Dust Functions:Linings of dust channels provides dust usage when triggered. They make the sword coats in in the dust so it heat up/freezes/electrify. Its output can make the whole sword freeze an arm or equivalent, can heat up to deal 5% per second on (another student), and current flow can stun upon hit for about 10 seconds.

History: That group of former hunters gave it to her as a present for entering Atlas Academy. She is therefore more proficient with it than she is with Reaction.

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Oh hey Blair good to see you here! Catalina ran to the side of his teammate and asked, Anything to do?

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