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The Vale Region / Tea Time Shenanigans [Limit 2/4]
« on: January 06, 2017, 12:40:34 AM »
Arian, for some unknown reason, was still in Vale. His team had already returned to Mistral, and he should've as well. Taking a sip of tea, he realized that Valian tea was what Arian stayed in Vale for. He'd probably return to Mistral the next day, but in the mean time, Arian is going to abuse the time he has to enjoy Vale's oddities.

The shop (he had forgotten it's name) he was in wasn't busy to be exact, but it wasn't empty either. His table was a four seater, and Arian took up one of the seats. It wasn't too reputable as far as he remembered, but Arian thinks the tea is interesting. He should get coffee next time. Musing in his thoughts, Arian took another sip of tea as he waits the day to pass and return home...

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The Vale Region / Under the Table Internships [CLOSED/INVITE]
« on: January 06, 2017, 12:13:39 AM »
Continued from: http://rwbyfanon.com/smf/Archive2/index.php/topic,3293.0.html

Whistling a little tune as made his way to his desk, Eklipsei reminisced about the good old days. In fact, he was pretty sure this was one of those old White Fang bases he had liberated. It was tedious, but Eklipsei remembered the experiences of his journey. Thrown through windows, shot multiple times, even took a grenade to the face at one point. This allowed to ignore their thoughts with an excuse.

Swiping everything off the desk, it was nice and pristine until Eklipsei dropped the boxes onto it. Quickly organizing it so that he can quickly brief the three, Eklipsei makes hand motions to have the three come closer and listen to what he is to say. Digging deep into the box, he began his explanation.

"What you interns are going to do is catch a criminal!" With a frown, he digs deeper into the box, "You'll be provided information to begin your own investigation on the criminal, while I will gather more information for your usage."

Eklipsei found what he was looking for, and pulled it out of the box. It was a folder, and drops it onto the desk in view of the three interns. Opened up reveals an image of Beacon Student Fenix Cerulean! Elaborating as to why he has said image, "Fenix is one of my contacts persay, and you can gather more information from him." With a shrug, "I currently have no idea where he might be right now, but I'm definitely sure he's at a bar of some sort to gather more information. He'd probably be at The Clam."

Dropping into a chair behind the desk then leaning back in a relaxed stance, Eklipsei hopefully asks what would be his last line, "Any questions?"

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MiA Characters / Re: Andrew Maxwell
« on: January 05, 2017, 11:22:45 PM »
Welcome! One thing I want to get out of the way is that you probably shouldn't bump the profile until it's been at most a week. We can't get on all profiles lightning quick. Otherwise, I'll get to the actual review.

Appearance: You can combine the combat and in public subsections with appearance, since it's not really needed. What type of armor is the material? Skin color? Scars? Eye color? These are little nitpicks, but it does help with building an image for the character.

History: Preeeeetty edgy. There are only two obvious issues I can see. One, is that hunting outside the Atlas would be particularly safe because of Grimm. Second, Headmaster Alban would PROBABLY know about Maxwell's fake transcripts. If you want that, I'm okay with it. Also, you might want to explain how killing became second nature to your character because hunting animals and fighting off grimm is MUCH more different than killing a human being.

Personality: Expand more on it! How intelligent is he? What ideals does he hold? How does he deal with stress?Is he mentally strong?

Aura and Semblance: Combine the weakness section with this. Second, keep in mind the fatigue system put into place for semblances would probably affect how effective the semblance is. I'm not sure about the drawbacks making the semblance balanced, since there are chances where Maxwell can succeed in getting an autohit (which we don't want). I'd probably suggest adding one weakness that would not allow autohits.

Combat Behavior: Like before, combine the weakness section with this. Also, expand more. What other strengths and weaknesses could he have? I can't provide any examples as of now, but at least try for 5 of each.

Weapon: It should be fine, but I'd suggest splitting it into two weapon since complex is not always better. Weight would definitely be an issue, possible malfunctions is an issue that can occur. Size might be another issue to hold all these mechanisms for it to mechashift.

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Approved Characters / Re: Talen De L'Eglantine
« on: January 05, 2017, 10:44:57 PM »
You expected me to move the profile, but it was I, a recommendation!

Shitty JoJokes aside, +1.

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Approved Characters / Re: Talen De L'Eglantine
« on: January 05, 2017, 06:46:50 PM »
Xar, is this full transfer or is there some changes.

Make a list if there are changes, otherwise I'll will move the profile.

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MiA Characters / Re: Greyson Yin
« on: January 05, 2017, 06:40:15 PM »
Just to inform you so you know in the future, whenever you made changes to the profile according to the reviewer, drop a post to let the reviewer know that changes had been made.

As to waste less time, I'll inform the reviewer now so that the reviewing process can move by faster.

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MiA Characters / Re: Venus/Demi Eurydice
« on: January 05, 2017, 06:27:59 PM »
Sorry for being extremely late, had a few issues I had to deal with.

I recall seeing this on the preboot forum. Is this an exact transfer, or are there any changes? If so, list the changes.

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SOVEREIGN
Is he gone?

(SOVEREIGN pokes his head out from behind AURUM as to check for his safety.)

SOVEREIGN
(With a shaky grin) Thank god! (Sovereign moves away from Aurum with confidence) I agree with Aurum about pretty faces! Food? Not so much!

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Beacon Academy / Re: [REDACTED] [Closed]
« on: January 05, 2017, 03:23:04 PM »
Fenix grinned while he was unpacking his luggage. His leader was going to be interesting, that's for sure. Fenix's once organized luggage is soon put into disarray as he threw around clothes, trinkets, even potentially lethal objects onto his bed in a hurry to unpack everything. Since it seems that it's time to reassure said leader, Fenix decided to voice his thoughts in a short and simple way.

"Yeah, what they said." Finally removing everything from his luggage, Fenix quickly shoves it somewhere near his bed. Fenix then took the time to slightly organize the mess he had created before jumping onto the bed to relax.

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The Vale Region / Re: A Dis-ARMing Situation [Closed]
« on: January 05, 2017, 03:13:35 PM »
Iron briefly considered asking Vivian so that he may keep the arm until they make it back to his workshop just so that he may investigate the arm further. However, that might halt their progress back to Beacon and discourage Vivian from working with Iron, so he did the smart thing and returned the arm to Vivian. As Iron returned the arm, he planned to keep an eye on the arm so that he can see how the arm reattached to Vivian.

"Well. Here."

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General Discussion / Re: RWBYFanon's 2nd Gladiatorial Games
« on: December 06, 2016, 12:03:21 AM »
Name: Hanjo Shumuda
Race and Gender: Human Male (210)
Equipment: Copper Bow (32.5), Leather Breastplate (10), Leather Leggings (7), Leather Gloves (4), Copper High Boots (12.5)
Skills: Adept Archer (84), Competent Dodger (30), Adequate Discipline (9), Novice Swordsman (5)
Points Remaining: 16
Backstory: After murdering his not brother Genjoj, he sought forgiveness and repentance for his actions. To make himself feel better, Hanjo decides to kill people instead of, y'know, leaving them alone. What a surprise.

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Beacon Academy / Re: Blinding Rage [Closed]
« on: December 03, 2016, 11:42:10 PM »
Noir was waiting as the sounds of talking pass him by. Foreign or familiar, it really didn’t matter to him as he waited for the bell to sound. Time passes, until it’s interrupted by Noir’s team leader as she rang the bell. With a quick reaction to the sound, Noir raised his gun while he activates his semblance. Feeling the familiar strain, he quickly enacts the action he had planned to take. Noir sees the two figures, of whom he assumes are Mithra and Mira, in front of him, and quickly aimed, albeit losing accuracy. Four shots rang out as Noir fired off two bullets at each.


The strain started to slowly grow, so Noir quickly disabled his semblance. With a quick sigh of relief from the pain, Noir put his left hand down, with his sword hand out as he waits for them and the sounds they’d make. Noir seems to back up a little bit, assuming that Lyssa is next to him, so that he could give her some more ground to use in battle. Noir intends to avoid using his semblance, and he’ll do it by giving himself plenty of room to do what needs to be done.

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General Discussion / Re: RWBYFanon's 2nd Gladiatorial Games
« on: November 28, 2016, 11:40:12 PM »
Name: Genjoj Shumuda
Race and Gender: Human Male (210)
Equipment: Iron Scimitar (40), Iron Breastplate (40), Iron Leggings (32), Iron Gauntlets (16)
Skills: Competent Swordsman (30),  Competent Fighter (18), Skilled Armor User (20)
Points Remaining: 14
Backstory: After being nearly murdered by his not brother Hanjo, Genjoj sought peace and harmony after his recovery. He intends to do this via killing people. Works right?

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The Vale Region / Re: Walking the Beat [Event]
« on: November 16, 2016, 12:22:47 AM »
Eklipsei seems to have a pause in his movement for a moment, before continuing on forward. He had heard Dorothy’s input on team positioning, and he was currently mulling over whether or not that would be a good idea. Eklipsei COULD possibly lose Dorothy if she was to be found by their target, however he imagines that she theoretically could handle herself. Eklipsei would have to adjust for the what would essentially be the missing person, but he can probably handle that with the assistance of the students currently with him. Solidifying the evidence within his mind, he decides to voice his conclusion.

”That is a reasonable idea, we’ll speed up so that we’ll distance ourselves.” Eklipsei’s body moved in a way that suggested he was gonna say more, but suddenly the ground started to rumble beneath them. He quickly brought his gun up, quickly twisting and turning in all directions to see what might be causing it. It was a good idea, but unfortunately Eklipsei forgot the most relevant direction. The ground in front of them broke apart, as a Grimm that looks like a King Taijitu comes roaring out of the hole.

With a roar, the both heads of the Grimm rampaged around the area as it left the hole. Buildings fell as Eklipsei quickly fired upon the Grimm in reaction to its rampage. One head continued to rampage as if Eklipsei’s attacks did not affect it, further ruining the area around it. However, the other head quickly turned to Eklipsei and slammed into him. With his armor not built to take on Grimm, Eklipsei gets thrown into a building, destroying more of the area around them.

Eklipsei had been incapacitated, and is currently trying to recover their bearings and weaponry. With a blurry vision, Eklipsei starts trying to get up, only to fall back onto the ground in pain… After a few seconds, both heads of the King Taijitu turned to the group of students as their new targets. With a roar, the Grimm bares their fangs at the group as both heads start to slither around the area.



(OOC: I’m going to be extremely informal for combat in this thread, so you don’t actually have to do aura counts. However, I will call BS if need be, and politely ask that you edit it.)

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The Vale Region / Re: Bombs over Vale [Open]
« on: November 16, 2016, 12:21:13 AM »
Fenix had been casually walking around Vale, keeping an eye out for the many shops of Vale. He had been looking for a new everyday suit now, but he hadn’t been making any money lately, so he can’t exactly afford one as of now. However, that doesn’t mean he’s not making a list of what he wanted to buy and the location to get them from within Vale. With that in mind, Fenix has a bright smile on his visage, and nothing could ruin that at all as he walks down the streets he is on.

He had heard a faint noise, and thought nothing of it. However, when his gaze passed over the area it came from, Fenix saw smoke rising in that direction. With a worried frown, Fenix quickly sped over to the area as fast as he could to see what’s happening. As he moved closer and closer to the area, the sounds of chaos started to grow louder and louder around him. Spying two people, one leaving the other, he quickly sped up to the figure that was left behind.

As he grew closer, he had a clearer look of the figure, Fenix took in the appearance of the girl as he quickly closed the distance so that they can talk over the chaos. With a quick glance to see if she was injured or not, Fenix quickly assessed the situation out loud, ”Are you hurt? What happened here? Do you need assistance?” Fenix quickly glanced over her crutch, which is what he presumed to be a weapon, before taking out his brass knuckle and fitting it on. With a frown and a bit of distaste, His thoughts about the figure that left the girl behind swirling in his head, Fenix mutters to himself, ”At least make sure people you come across are safe…”

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