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Coconut Cream
« on: April 05, 2018, 01:01:01 PM »
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Name: Coconut Cream

Theme: Reol - + ♂

Age: 17

Species and Gender: Male Human

Symbol:  A cream-colored Mars symbol with a hot pink plus shifted to the left of it.

Occupation: 1st year student at Beacon academy

Appearance: Coconut stands at 178 cm and weighs 75 kg, with a decently muscular build. His pale blonde hair is on the longer side for a boy, reaching to the base of his neck in the back; if left unstyled, it could easily reach down below his nose at the front, but Cream spends more time than he'd like to admit every morning to keep it in a sort of 'messy bedhead' style – the effect is pleasant, though clearly artificial.

The boy himself is by no general means unattractive, with well-defined cheekbones, deep blue eyes and slightly thin, slanted eyebrows. Cream is close-sighted and forced to wear dark-framed glasses.

Coconut can most often be seen wearing a white, short-sleeve coat which reaches down to his knees. He tends to leave the coat unbuttoned, revealing a cream-colored button-up shirt underneath. He wears white lace-up shoes, and his pants are usually the only article of clothing he has different pairs of, ranging from blue jeans to beige suit pants. He usually keeps his sword in a scabbard on his hip, though when going into combat he may opt to keep it in its secondary form attached to several clips on the back of his coat.

The bulk of Cream’s wardrobe consists of various accessories. He usually has something in his hair – a hair clip, a ribbon, a small jewel, etc. – and can often be seen wearing numerous bracelets.

His right arm bears a straight scar running up from the elbow, another similar scar above his right ankle.

History: Cream was not born into a family of warriors, businessmen or entrepeneurs. Instead, he was born into  a family of artists - his father a writer, his mother the latest entry in a long line of painters and his older sister a musical prodigy. Born with a silver spoon in his mouth, he was expected to join his family as a creator of art and live the good life.

That was until he went to one of his sister's piano recitals when he was 12. He spent the entire evening bored out of his mind until his father ran into an acquaintance on their way out. The man was tall, muscular, with a thich head of hair and impeccable posture. He was impressive to look at and simply oozed confidence. When the boy later asked who the man was, his father told him that he was a huntsman.

From that day onward, the boy knew what he wanted to be: he wanted to be big, tough and menacing - a huntsman! Despite protests from his family, he began training every day on his own. Eventually his father caved in and let the huntsman he had met that day help tutor him. The man's name was Ether and, as it turned out, he was actually retired. That didn't mean he had forgotten his own training, though - Cream became a formiddable swordsman under his guidance.

The boy attended Signal and finished with high marks in most subjects, though he clearly hadn't mastered his aura or mechanics of any kind. He was still accepted into Beacon, where he continues to focus more on physical training than anything else. Only time will tell if it will be enough.


Personality: Cream is a person completely lacking inhibitions which tend to be oh-so-necessary for a teenage boy to survive. He quickly becomes attracted to members of the opposite sex and doesn’t hide it on any level. Despite his good looks, he often appears creepy and even depraved to most.

Coconut is an overwhelmingly outgoing person. He expresses his own thoughts as much as he inquires about those of the people around him. That being said, he has zero understanding of social norms and often acts all too familiar with people he’s only just met.

He can also be somewhat spiteful to those who wrong him or anyone he likes - and he likes most of the people he meets. Cream might initially seem superficial and focused on looks above all else, but he is also capable of being good friends with anyone he deems fun to be around - a pretty face just helps.

Aura and Semblance: Cream's aura is, unsurprisingly, coconut cream and is of just slightly above average strength for a huntsman in training at his age. Coconut is hardly a master of his own aura, and has little practice in utilizing it.

His semblence, which happens to be hereditary, is rather lackluster in its power and potential - Cream possesses the ability to 'steal' color from his surroundings in a 1 meter radius around any part of his body. In actuality, he covers a surface in a thin layer of his aura, essentially painting it with it, while also 'sucking up' the colors previously there, which he can then reuse as he wishes.

As he doesn't bother practicing with his ability, he can store only roughly 1^m of color, though he can technically paint in the color of his own aura infinitely, though he'd start to feel exhausted after roughly 10^m. He can choose from any color he has sucked up and store it for an indefinite amount of time. When he sucks up more color than he can store, a random color already stored starts to be discarded and replaced.

Coco has been practicing using his aura offensively under the guidance of Prism Skylark, and while he hasn't mastered it perfectly, he is capable of creating mid-ranged aura blasts from his weapon.

Combat Behavior:  Due to his poor vision, Cream stays away from ranged combat. His fighting style is notably aggressive, with little room for actively dodging or blocking his opponent’s attacks, instead preferring to concentrate on dealing damage. His attacks aren’t always precise, but over years of practice he’s learned to quickly recover from a miss with a follow-up strike.

If facing another swordsman or, at the very least, someone wielding a weapon similar enough to a sword, he does quite well when it comes to parrying.

Against a physically stronger opponent or multiple attackers, most of Cream’s usual strategies fall apart. At that point he’d either look for support or opt for quick consecutive strikes, then retreating. If facing multiple ranged opponents, Cream would instead opt for running as fast as possible in the opposite direction.

He mostly prefers using O.T.N. in its secondary long sword form, only switching to its primary form if his opponent is faster than him or if he knows he's running out of steam. The tertiary form comes out for killing blows or dealing with tougher opponents who would otherwise tank his attacks.

WEAPON

Name: O.T.N.

Primary Form: A stainless steel short sword with a silver cross guard, the blade being 50 cm long. The pommel of the weapon seems to be split in half, the bottom half of it being twistable.

[Stamina usage: 3-5% for basic slashes and stabs] [Damage: Normal]

Secondary Form: Upon twisting the bottom part of the pommel, two more previously folded steel blades spring forth from the cross guard and slide into place at the tip of the sword. Once the blades connect at the tip, the length of the sword reaches 1 meter, slightly shorter than the average long sword.

[Stamina usage: 5-8% for basic attacks, heavy swings and attacks going through multiple enemies take upwards of 10%] [Damage: Roughly x1.5]

Tertiary Form: Golden O.T.N. The weapon in its secondary form can be magnetically attached to the clips on the back of Coconut's coat. If the pommel is twisted again, rather than returning to its short sword form it will then connect with the clips and detach them from the coat. The clips extend and slide along the blade forming an extension which reaches an additional 80 cm, the total length of the blade then being 180cm. The weapon is bulky and Coconut is not fully used to wielding it in this form, being that the blade is longer than he is tall.

[Stamina usage: Starting from 10% for basic slashes, a heavy swing ranging from 20-25%] [Damage: Depending on cicumstances, from x2 to x4 normal damage]

History: Cream constructed the weapon when he was at Signal academy. The scars on his arm and leg are from messing around with the mechanisms inside and having the spring-loaded blades slice into him.

He broke the weapon's inner mechanisms during a spar with Prism which he attempted to do with added weights to the blade. The weapon was repaired and upgraded by the blacksmith which the team encountered during their initiation, thanks to Amane.
« Last Edit: June 29, 2018, 03:40:11 AM by Walter »
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Reginald Royale - 1st year snotty brat of team RBLS. "I'm telling father about this!"

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Anza Burgundy - 1st Year archer of team CRSA. "War eagle, feller!"

Silica Methiviola - Assistant to the Royale Family/Reginald. "Suck my metaphorical dick, nerd."

Coconut Cream - 1st Year pervert of team CASA. "B-before we fight could you just like... nyah once for me?"

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Re: Coconut Cream
« Reply #1 on: April 05, 2018, 08:51:34 PM »
+1 nice work.
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Re: Coconut Cream
« Reply #2 on: April 06, 2018, 08:38:48 AM »
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Students
Wisteria Lockheart - 1st Year student at Beacon. "Don't make me throw a book at you"
Shiroe Pendragon - 1st Year Student at beacon - "This is my monochrome reality" - Team MARS
Lavender du Lac - 1st Year Student at Haven -  "The harder I try the further things drift away." Team RWND
Ayaka Miyamoto - 1st Year student at Beacon. "Tsubame Gaeshi!" - Team ALIA
Vermilion Desdemona - 3rd Year Student at Beacon - "Only time you'd be above me is when your head rests on my pike"
Talen de L'eglantine - 3rd Year Student at Beacon
Kei Almas - 4th Year Student at Beacon - "Everything is ripe for the taking!"
Aurum LeBlanc - 3rd Year Student at Atlas - "Lay back, take it easy, and watch the comedy unfold"

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Re: Coconut Cream
« Reply #3 on: June 28, 2018, 07:13:50 PM »
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CHARACTER

Name: Coconut Cream

Theme: Reol - + ♂

Age: 17

Species and Gender: Male Human

Symbol:  A cream-colored Mars symbol with a hot pink plus shifted to the left of it.

Occupation: 1st year student at Beacon academy

Appearance: Coconut stands at 176 cm and weighs 75 kg, with a decently muscular build. His pale blonde hair is on the longer side for a boy, reaching to the base of his neck in the back; if left unstyled, it could easily reach down below his nose at the front, but Cream spends more time than he'd like to admit every morning to keep it in a sort of 'messy bedhead' style – the effect is pleasant, though clearly artificial.

The boy himself is by no general means unattractive, with well-defined cheekbones, deep blue eyes and slightly thin, slanted eyebrows. Cream is close-sighted and forced to wear dark-framed glasses.

Coconut can most often be seen wearing a white, short-sleeve coat which reaches down to his knees. He tends to leave the coat unbuttoned, revealing a cream-colored button-up shirt underneath. He wears white lace-up shoes, and his pants are usually the only article of clothing he has different pairs of, ranging from blue jeans to beige suit pants. He keeps his sword in a scabbard on his hip.

The bulk of Cream’s wardrobe consists of various accessories. He usually has something in his hair – a hair clip, a ribbon, a small jewel, etc. – and can often be seen wearing numerous bracelets.
His right arm bears a straight scar running up from the elbow, another similar scar above his right ankle.

History: Cream was not born into a family of warriors, businessmen or entrepeneurs. Instead, he was born into  a family of artists - his father a writer, his mother the latest entry in a long line of painters and his older sister a musical prodigy. Born with a silver spoon in his mouth, he was expected to join his family as a creator of art and live the good life.

That was until he went to one of his sister's piano recitals when he was 12. He spent the entire evening bored out of his mind until his father ran into an acquaintance on their way out. The man was tall, muscular, with a thich head of hair and impeccable posture. He was impressive to look at and simply oozed confidence. When the boy later asked who the man was, his father told him that he was a huntsman.

From that day onward, the boy knew what he wanted to be: he wanted to be big, tough and menacing - a huntsman! Despite protests from his family, he began training every day on his own. Eventually his father caved in and let the huntsman he had met that day help tyutor him. The man's name was Ether and, as it turned out, he was actually retired. That didn't mean he had forgotten his own training, though - Cream became a formiddable swordsman uder his guidance.

The boy attended Signal and finished with high marks in most subjects, though he clearly hadn't mastered his aura or mechanics of any kind. He was still accepted into Beacon, where he continues to focus more on physical training than anything else. Only time will tell if it will be enough.


Personality: Cream is a person completely lacking inhibitions which tend to be oh-so-necessary for a teenage boy to survive. He quickly becomes attracted to members of the opposite sex and doesn’t hide it on any level. Despite his good looks, he often appears creepy and even depraved to most.

Coconut is an overwhelmingly outgoing person. He expresses his own thoughts as much as he inquires about those of the people around him. That being said, he has zero understanding of social norms and often acts all too familiar with people he’s only just met.

He can also be somewhat spiteful to those who wrong him or anyone he likes - and he likes most of the people he meets. Cream might initially seem superficial and focused on looks above all else, but he is also capable of being good friends with anyone he deems fun to be around - a pretty face just helps.

Aura and Semblance: Cream's aura is, unsurprisingly, coconut cream and is of just slightly above average strength for a huntsman in training at his age. Coconut is hardly a master of his own aura, and has little practice in utilizing it.

His semblence, which happens to be hereditary, is rather lackluster in its power and potential - Cream possesses the ability to 'steal' color from his surroundings in a 1 meter radius around any part of his body. In actuality, he covers a surface in a thin layer of his aura, essentially painting it with it, while also 'sucking up' the colors previously there, which he can then reuse as he wishes.

As he doesn't bother practicing with his ability, he can store only roughly 1^m of color, though he can technically paint in the color of his own aura infinitely, though he'd start to feel exhausted after roughly 10^m. He can choose from any color he has sucked up and store it for an indefinite amount of time. When he sucks up more color than he can store, a random color already stored starts to be discarded and replaced.

Combat Behavior:  Due to his poor vision, Cream stays away from ranged combat. His fighting style is notably aggressive, with little room for actively dodging or blocking his opponent’s attacks, instead preferring to concentrate on dealing damage. His attacks aren’t always precise, but over years of practice he’s learned to quickly recover from a miss with a follow-up strike.

If facing another swordsman or, at the very least, someone wielding a weapon similar enough to a sword, he does quite well when it comes to parrying.

Against a physically stronger opponent or multiple attackers, most of Cream’s usual strategies fall apart. At that point he’d either look for support or opt for quick consecutive strikes, then retreating. If facing multiple ranged opponents, Cream would instead opt for running as fast as possible in the opposite direction.

WEAPON

Name: O.T.N.

Primary Form: A stainless steel short sword with a silver cross guard, the blade being 50 cm long. The pommel of the weapon seems to be split in half, the bottom half of it being twistable.

Secondary Form: Upon twisting the bottom part of the pommel, two more previously folded steel blades spring forth from the cross guard and slide into place at the tip of the sword. Once the blades connect at the tip, the length of the sword reaches 1 meter, slightly shorter than the average long sword.

History: Cream constructed the weapon when he was at Signal academy. The scars on his arm and leg are from messing around with the mechanisms inside and having the spring-loaded blades slice into him.
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Re: Coconut Cream
« Reply #4 on: June 29, 2018, 03:38:49 AM »
Fixed typos in history, added offensive aura capabilities to aura section. Added sword forms to combat behavior, tertiary sword form and stamina usage/potential damage to the weapon forms.
Razzmatazz Gele - 2nd Year warrior of happiness of Team ____. "Oh, I also like ____! Let's be friends!"

Janna Tarmac - 1st Year tank lady of Team DGTL. "Our job is to protect the innocent, and that's what I do."

Reginald Royale - 1st year snotty brat of team RBLS. "I'm telling father about this!"

Rufus Chocla - 2nd year freestyle rapper of team APRC. "Rap comes from the Soul, don't mess with the Flow, if you can't take no more, don't wait for Encore!"

Anza Burgundy - 1st Year archer of team CRSA. "War eagle, feller!"

Silica Methiviola - Assistant to the Royale Family/Reginald. "Suck my metaphorical dick, nerd."

Coconut Cream - 1st Year pervert of team CASA. "B-before we fight could you just like... nyah once for me?"

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Re: Coconut Cream
« Reply #5 on: July 01, 2018, 04:47:01 AM »
stamina/damage values seem a little over board, like using a quarter of your stamina for one heavy swing but as long as you are ok with it. edits approved.
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