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Character Creation / Re: Dawn Mae
« on: August 15, 2018, 12:47:49 PM »
Okay, here goes nothing,

Nickname

Gamer names are not much more than nicknames. Didn't thought I had to do this, but I added it for the sake of clarification

Professional gamer not being mentioned anywhere
Well, it is now:

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...This was also very important considering that she actually gained Lien by entering and winning tournaments in all kinds of games. This is also where her Gamer name, Zeiis, rose to the scoreboards. Through this, a lot of other pro gamers noticed her, challenging her, fighting her, as well as a few smaller gaming companies which asked her to try out their games. That was exactly what she wanted. A life as a pro gamer.


Her Hometown

So, I thought I had allready changed it from near stemswell to actually just stemswell, but, apparently... I did not... Well, Changed it now.

History being repeated

Literally no idea how that happend, but I fixed it.

High IQ thing

So, didnít changed that much. She's still described as smart and being able to come up with a plan, but this should still work.

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She always has been smart and always will be, she got used to be called 'the one with a plan', and will most likely act like this. That by no means says that she never makes a mistake, no, she does, but she's able to hide it up with either smart words or by coming up with another quick plan.

Semblance

Okay, I wrote a bit more about the 'touch drawback'
If this is still too insufficient, I'm going to look for a new semblance.

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...However, this semblance requires, as mentioned above, that Dawn has to touch the required person or object. But this isn't your ordinary 'tag you're it'-touch thing. The touch has to be at least Three seconds long for her to know her opponents Aura level. Knowing parts of their semblance takes fifteen seconds, and to know fragments of their personality can take half a minute.
A simple handshake won't always be enough though to get all the information she needs, and she can only find out parts or fragments about her opponents abilities.

and remove the "how to best use them" to simply:

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For objects, she can find out the exact materials they are made of, know their function and the basics about how to use them.

Combat behavior

Changed it up in a similar way as the personality,

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She's intelligent and a great strategist, having no problem to come up with a good plan. After looking at her opponents moves and patterns for a couple of turns, she can guess their ability and limits. Keyword here is guess, not know.

And her semblance makes up for the 'knowing everything after taking a bullet' part

Weapon

So, I removed the grappling hock and the skateboard laser. I keept the Skateboard though. It's juts not a weapon anymove. Only a way of transportation that she brings along to a fight. But since it doesnít do demage, it should be okay.

I would really like to keep the sword and flamethrowers, so just tell me what i need to change there and I think we should be okay... Or not, who know.

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Everywhere Else / Coffee and friends are the perfect blend [closed]
« on: August 13, 2018, 08:47:39 AM »
It was a nice Saturday morning in Atlas. The rising sun shone its light through the clouds and bathed the city in a pleasant light.

Kisha was standing in front of a small building with a brown winter coat and a beige scarf around her neck. The words 'Atlesian Coffeehouse' were written in capital letters on a wooden sign above the front door. The building itself let out a warm, inviting light and the smell of coffee and pastry filled the air, but Kisha decided not to go in yet.

She took a look around the street again. Some shops, many people going their way. It was actually quite similar to Vale, if it weren’t for the cold temperature and the military robots and soldiers stationed around every corner. It shouldn't surprise her, after all, Atlas was,the most advanced of them all if it comes to technology and military, and especially now that the Vytal festival was on pace, the security measures were particularly high, but with all the military, it was more of an uncomfortable rather than a secure feeling.

As she looked around, she started to step from one leg to the other to keep herself warm. Well, she couldn’t complain about it, it was her fault that she arrived almost fifteen minutes early, but now some time passed and her 'friend' should hopefully arrive soon.

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Beacon Academy / Re: Big Game Hunting [Closed]
« on: August 13, 2018, 08:14:14 AM »
Quiet and rhythmic footsteps echoed through the Academy's corridors as Kisha, humming softly to herself, made her way to Beacon's testing range. After she lost to Prism, she decided to become more diverse with her weapon and combat system. In other words, she ventured on new types of dust and modified some of her arrows with those. With the quiver on her back and Cocoa in its holster, she was ready to try out the new arrows. But before that happened, she saw two people outside the weapon workshop. While she couldn't remember ever meeting the older one, she did recall one time she saw, and also talked to the younger, and smaller one of the two. There was only one thing she couldnít remember about him. His name.

She didn't think much about it and just said the first thing that came to mind.
"Hey, Mister Grumpy, you still remember me?" She called out waving, before walking up to them.

"Thatís your girlfriend?" She asked with a laugh and then turned to the girl "Hi, I think we havenít met before. I'm Kihsa. Kisha Miles" .

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Beacon Academy / Re: Tea and Cookies [Open]
« on: August 11, 2018, 02:54:20 PM »
"Oh, it's a schoko aller grenze" she said with a smile until she noticed her mistake. The cake was so named only in her grandparents' shop, which is why she quickly corrected herself "It's a chocolate surprise-egg cake, wait, I should have a picture" Kisha quickly searched round in her hoodie pocket under the apron until she found her scroll. It was quickly turned on and she wiped across the screen to go through the pictures in the gallery. "Uhm... hm... Ah, there it is!" She turned the scroll over and held the screen to Leona.
We'll get a new teammate soon and so I thought I would bake one for him, but we don't have to stop making the cookies, I can make the cake later."
Kisha put her scroll away again and then went to the bowl with the batter "Let's make the cookies for your team first, if anything is left I can take them for mine. The batter looks good, did you already put salt in?"

Spoiler: That’s the picture, if you wanna see it • show
This cake tastes delicious by the way

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Beacon Academy / Re: Tea and Cookies [Open]
« on: August 11, 2018, 02:59:16 AM »
Kisha decided not to question Leona's reasons any further, but at the same time she would have liked to object. To be baked only to be burned afterwards. The poor cookies, they had such a fulfilling life before them! She looked for the last time to the sad pile of burned cookies and then gratefully accepted the apron.
"I was going to make a cake, but I have time for that later, so those are the cookies we're going to make next?" she asked, tying the apron behind her. She could see the book and especially the recipe better now and read it quickly.

Butter
Sugar
Salt
Vanilla sugar
Eggs
Flour
Baking powder
... and a few other things

"hmm..." Kisha looked up for a moment, "How many portions do we make and do you want to garnish them afterwards?" Or do we just want to burn them? The last question was purposely left out. Well, even if they only palnned on burning them, she might as well use the burned cookies for something. Only the previous ones were already too far gone as that she could use these again.

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Beacon Academy / Re: Tea and Cookies [Ope
« on: August 11, 2018, 01:02:40 AM »
Again? Kisha thought as she watched the girl ran to the oven and saved the cookies from their fiery hell. Or rather what was left of the cookies, except for the black-baked sad-looking pastry.

Kisha still had the small grin on her face as she took the girls hand and shook it quickly up and down. "Hey there, I'm Kisha Miles, I've seen you in class a couple of times, weird that I've never talked to you before, is this your first time baking? Oh, I'm not saying it looks bad! When I baked for the first time- Okay, I've never burned anything, but that's just beginner's bad luck. Uh! Not that I was to saying that you look like a beginner! Everyone has just bad luck from time to time. Uhhhhm.... Your Name! I should have heard it before ... Uhm ... Uhh .. Lyonea?"

Only then did Kisha stop the handshaking and scratched embarrassed the back of her head. Unfortunately, forgetting the names of others was nothing new to her. She was lucky if she didn't accidentally forget the names of her teammates. When she looked away in embarrassment, she discovered an open cookie-cook-book and looked briefly over it. Standard recipe. But she decided not to say anything and waited for a response from the girl infront of her.

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Teams / Re: Looking for a beacon 1st year replacement
« on: August 11, 2018, 12:32:29 AM »
Well, I wanted to discuss this after the other two agreed with the new team composition, but I doubt that they will have anything agains you joining the team.

Since our B is missing and Kin unfortunately has no B in the name, we will probably have to look for a new one. After looking around a bit, those are the ones that came up,

SMKE (Smoke)
MKNI (Mahogany)
INKK (Ink)

But as I already said I wanted to wait for the other two before we go too much into planning

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Teams / Re: Looking for a beacon 1st year replacement
« on: August 10, 2018, 01:05:27 PM »
Totally fine by me!

(I want the bubble butt in our team ( ͡į ͜ʖ ͡į)  )

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Beacon Academy / Re: Tea and Cookies [Open]
« on: August 10, 2018, 06:01:33 AM »
Humming softly, Kisha walked through the halls of the Academy until a sweetish smell rose in her nose and stopped her for a second. It didn't really surprise her, there were a few students who wanted to use the kitchen every now and then for their own satisfaction, even though it was usually her standing in the room and baking.

Since Kisha was on her way to the kitchen anyway, she could as well see who was baking and maybe make a friend along the way.
As she, still humming, approaching the kitchen, the sweetish smell turned a little ... dull.
With a "haaaaallllloo-" she opened the door carefully, but then interrupted herself as she saw the cloud of smoke forming above the oven. The cloud was still small .... Still...
"I think something's burning" She said slightly giggling and waved first at the blond-haired classmate, and than pointed to the oven.

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Plot Zone / Re: Big Game Hunting [Tentative Signups]
« on: August 08, 2018, 11:28:00 PM »
Throwing in Kisha, if the spot's still open

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Teams / Looking for a beacon 1st year replacement
« on: August 08, 2018, 02:03:49 PM »
Now that team BSEK has split up again, the remaining members are looking for their newest (hopefully staying) teammate.

The current team looks like this:

Nathan Eau (nathan67003)
Ismael "Izzy" Skhaos (Th3KingOfChaos)
Kisha Miles (DEXES)

There arenít any particular preferences, We'd only like the team to be an active one.

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Not even a second passed when Kiro sent a second ice beam after the first one. Prism's oncoming shot was streaked by the beam and covered in a thin layer of ice, which didn't slow or stop the shot. While the ice beam continued to fly towards Prism, Kiro got hit by the shot in the flank, though, thanks to the ice, the paralysis was ineffective, the damage remained however.

Without paying much attention to the damage, the dragon flapped its wings and let himself be carried back a few yards, still keeping an eye on Prism and also firing a second ice blast.

Meanwhile, Smokey and Mikado had bashed through the wall and were already greeted by two explosions. Thanks to Smokey, the knockback was prevented and he was, just as planned, thrown forward towards Amane. For a short time he was completely in the air, but quickly regained the ground under his feet, as he jumped forward for more momentum, dodging Jocelyn's shot in the process.

As Mikado was barely two meters away from Amane, he swung his bo in a diagonal line from the bottom up, aiming from Amane's left leg to her right shoulder.


Log:

(Kiro)
Ice breath: 8% + Possibility of a limb being frozen in an ice block, at Prism x2

(Mikado)
Slash: 6% at Amane

Aura: 69%
Semblance: 93%
Kiro's Dustbreath (Ice) : 85%
Shotgun: 14/14

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Character Creation / Re: Dawn Mae
« on: August 03, 2018, 01:56:38 PM »
No, I'm not offended at all. I'm aware that my English still needs a lot more improvement, so I'm glad for every help I can get.

I've changed laser to beam, and wrote that it runs on energy-Dust to make it relate more to the series

If she lives in a large town why is there now games store? Why doesn't she just get them ordered in?
...With the release of a new game, which she just had to have, she made her way to the Neighboring City to get one. The store in her town didn't have the game in the assortment yet and ordering it online would have taken too long. She wanted that game, and she wanted it now...


When did Dawn learn to be manipulative?

...The games in which the interaction with other players was necessary, got her the most. She learned how to use her opponent's words against them, and how to convince others to believe in what is wrong. She manipulated them, letting them shovel their own graves while she's leaning back, winning...


probably not the best solution, but it's something.



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Character Creation / Re: Dawn Mae
« on: August 01, 2018, 08:12:34 AM »
- Changed panther to jaguar
- Made her a bit heavier
- Changed the semblance

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Character Creation / Re: Dawn Mae
« on: August 01, 2018, 04:08:58 AM »
Changed the name and let the spell checker run over it again.

I haven't changed the semblance yet, but would it be acceptable if I make the hole carry endless items until it reaches a certain amount of weight, let's say 150kg, about three times Dawn's weight.
I also can make another side effect, by letting Dawn feel the weight of the items in the hole every time she opens it, giving her a headache. That's why she keeps the items in the hole to a minimum.

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