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WiP Characters / Re: Caro Hopplen
« on: February 23, 2017, 01:23:11 PM »
Hi!
'Names timeworker and il see what things you can edit a bit before this is moved to character creation.

Let's start with some glaring and not so glaring issues.

Appearance:
According to a standard height and weight chart being 162cm and weighing around 115lbs is a decently healthy weight and defiantly not enough to make someone look anorexic. May I also just quickly remind you that beacon is a combat academy and that if you cannot meet the physical requirements you cannot join.


History:
You're gonna need to overhaul some major points
-you can't be raised by animals
-point above kinda messes with the continuity of the rest of the profile
-Grimm will murder you without hesitation and as a kid you can't do anything to stop that.

Semblance:
Choose one animal

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Beacon Academy / Re: A Casual Time-Wasting Spar [CLOSED]
« on: February 21, 2017, 08:15:11 PM »
Griz paused mid-crouch and stared at the crowed in disbelief. Did...did they not get the jokes. Sheesh either Griz was more sleepy then he thought or he had read one too many old timey deuling novels.
...Well at least for this duel Griz wouldn't need to reach for a flintstock pistol. He was a terrible shot anyways.

Standing up and brushing himself off Griz gestured towards a small gathering of trees and smiled at the group.

"Well if you guys are really looking to get some sparring practicing in then there is a small outdoor sparring arena in a park just beyond those trees. Beacon put them in when students were complaining about being forced to fight indoors. The new ones even come equipped with dust force fields at their borders to prevent any stray bullets from hurting themselves!"

Brushing some of the sleep out of his eyes Griz got a good look at the guy from earlier. He was quite rude...but cute in a way. Something told Griz this was going to be a very  interesting spar.



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Beacon Academy / Re: A Casual Time-Wasting Spar [CLOSED]
« on: February 21, 2017, 06:42:25 AM »
Griz mumbled and shifted at the commotion. Obviously some people couldn't  appreciate a good nap when they saw one. Aw well, might as well see what's going on.
Groggily opening his eyes to see what was happening he was shocked to see 3 different sets of eyes staring at him. One of them being noticeably miffed about something or other. He had probably said something earlier but Griz was too out of it to hear anything so it would go completely ignored.

He also quickly realized that he had being hoisted upright and was being steadied by Catalina. Woah what was she doin here of all places.
Griz dusted himself off and addressed the gathering.

"Hey *yawn* guys! You must be wondering why I have gathered you hear today. Well I thank you for your deep interest and quick response. I, Griz *yawn* Blancard, have called this meeting on the behalves of lazy people everywhere. We demand that you let us sleep where we please or fight for the right to our sleeping spot in the form of a duel. Understood? Great! Meeting adjurened, nap time."
Griz yawned as he began to crouch to lay back down again. What a weird day this was turning out to be.


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Beacon Academy / Re: A Casual Time-Wasting Spar [CLOSED]
« on: February 19, 2017, 08:55:14 AM »
Drag...drag..drag
Was the sound Griz's body made as he was carried and thrown out of the arcade. His body made a nice thud against the concrete as he was "gently escorted" out of the facility. What was his heinous crime you ask? What could he have possibly done to earn such irrevocable scorn?
Well he had fallen asleep on one of the driving simulators...again. He was starting to think that the people who ran this business were holding a grudge against him from the time he broke the Dance Remannt Revolution machine.
Well no matter what the cause he was now outside...lying in the middle of the street... Actually now that he was thinking about it, this was pretty comfy! If he just shifted a bit to the right ... ah there we go! The perfect sleeping spot. So there he was, lying in the middle of the sidewalk, not a care in the world, bathing in a sunbeam.
I really need something to wake me up...I could really go for a spar right now...but the gym is soooo faaaaaar...I think il just stay here for now. Yeeeeeaaaah that sounds real nice.

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Plot Zone / Re: Casual Time-Wasting Spar
« on: February 17, 2017, 05:20:29 PM »
Griz Would be a good fit for the fight if you are still open

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Plot Zone / Re: War of Secrets [team]
« on: February 15, 2017, 06:30:01 AM »
Dorothy is all about concealed weaponry and blending in so il throw her in there if no team shows up to claim a spot.

 Not to mention it is her job canonically to explore and find places that aren't on maps and update them.

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Teams / Re: 2nd year team preparation thing.
« on: February 14, 2017, 05:48:45 PM »
Eyyy ok now that the new history was approved Xavier is ready to rock.

Team melodic with Mythos as a leader seems pretty good.

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Teams / Re: 2nd year team preparation thing.
« on: February 12, 2017, 08:25:24 PM »
Oh god Xavier and Revya on the same team
this...this is gonna be interesting

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Approved Characters / Re: Xavier Cendres
« on: February 12, 2017, 08:14:13 PM »
Appearance:
Small changes here to make him look better

History:
MAJOR OVERALL
since Sfumata doesn't really uh exist I gave Xavier a much more believable history from Atlas

Personality:
Adjustments have been made to fit history

Semblance:
Deleted a redundancy I had in here

Weapon and Gadet:
Weapon and gadget history has changed to fit history

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Teams / Re: 2nd year team preparation thing.
« on: February 12, 2017, 01:11:30 PM »
Ok ok but beware,
He was my second char I ever made and is currently very unpolished. I'm going back and tweeking him a bit so everything runs a bit more smoothly.

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Teams / Re: 2nd year team preparation thing.
« on: February 12, 2017, 10:32:41 AM »
Xavier would be a good fit for this team (then again I designed him to be good for any comp) so uh yeah sign him the fuck up.

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Introductions, birthdays, and departures. / Im back!
« on: February 04, 2017, 04:33:43 PM »
Well it sure has been a while since I've caught up with everything...
a month longer than I expected to be to be precise.
Kinda got caught up with getting my school grades high enough and getting into college ect...
Well I should be back and active once more!

I look forward to roleplaying again with you guys!

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Introductions, birthdays, and departures. / A temporary goodbye
« on: December 21, 2016, 08:16:07 AM »
So with the up coming holidays I am going to be very scarce around the website. Il finish any characters I'm reviewing (or at least until they are +1nd) and then il prob dissapear for a while.

Going under a lot of stress right now and if I will be role playing it should be at my best.

Bonus: this lets me work on my worldbuild! Creating a religion from scratch isn't as easy as I thought...

Anyway, Cheerio il be back soon!

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General Discussion / Re: Hey y'all. This is a survey.
« on: December 12, 2016, 03:56:26 PM »
I vote for  Jesus Christ, Nathan WTF -Rush

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Plot Zone / Re: How to catch a killer (sign-ups) [0/5]
« on: December 09, 2016, 09:27:26 PM »
Signing up Xavier Cendres,
Cause why not

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