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WiP Characters / Re: Caro Hopplen
« on: February 23, 2017, 01:23:11 PM »
Hi!
'Names timeworker and il see what things you can edit a bit before this is moved to character creation.
Let's start with some glaring and not so glaring issues.
Appearance:
According to a standard height and weight chart being 162cm and weighing around 115lbs is a decently healthy weight and defiantly not enough to make someone look anorexic. May I also just quickly remind you that beacon is a combat academy and that if you cannot meet the physical requirements you cannot join.
History:
You're gonna need to overhaul some major points
-you can't be raised by animals
-point above kinda messes with the continuity of the rest of the profile
-Grimm will murder you without hesitation and as a kid you can't do anything to stop that.
Semblance:
Choose one animal
'Names timeworker and il see what things you can edit a bit before this is moved to character creation.
Let's start with some glaring and not so glaring issues.
Appearance:
According to a standard height and weight chart being 162cm and weighing around 115lbs is a decently healthy weight and defiantly not enough to make someone look anorexic. May I also just quickly remind you that beacon is a combat academy and that if you cannot meet the physical requirements you cannot join.
History:
You're gonna need to overhaul some major points
-you can't be raised by animals
-point above kinda messes with the continuity of the rest of the profile
-Grimm will murder you without hesitation and as a kid you can't do anything to stop that.
Semblance:
Choose one animal