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Teams / Re: Looking for first year Beacon team members!
« on: February 23, 2018, 01:31:30 PM »
Welcome to the site, hope you have a good time here.

It would probably be best if you got your character approved first so people know who they are working with.

Best of luck.

Approved Characters / Re: Billy Bone
« on: February 23, 2018, 06:25:05 AM »
Most of those weaknesses are a bit naff but togeather they are enough. Good job and +1.

Character Creation / Re: Shoko-La Bitter
« on: February 21, 2018, 03:26:58 PM »
Yep +1

Character Creation / Re: Shoko-La Bitter
« on: February 21, 2018, 05:27:50 AM »
No one can have a truly balanced fighting style, there will always be weaknesses and there will always be gaps. And yes half the point of the combat behaviour is to specify that the character actually has weaknesses.

You can think that it's impossible to come up with weaknesses for versatile characters all you want but that only shows your poor creativity. Take one of the examples you used Ruby, sure she is proficient at both melee and range but at both aspects she has clear weaknesses. In it's sniper form Crescent Rose has a slow rate of fire and high recoil which means it doesn't work well against proper hoards or evasive opponents. In close quarters a scyth relies of long sweeping attacks as well as momentum to do it's damage this makes her predictable and if her style is broken vulnerable. Weaknesses don't have to be as general as 'bad at range' or whatever they just need to have an impact in a combat scenario, if you are truly incapable of coming up with some then feel free to DM or look at the other approved characters.

Rather than list off specific situations think about why Shoko struggles against them, what obstacle to they provide which makes her kit incapable of overcoming. Build off it and combine it with your profile.

Character Creation / Re: Shoko-La Bitter
« on: February 20, 2018, 08:32:17 PM »
OK well you've either added more detail on the kill or I missed it before so that's fine.

No one is really a Jack of all trades. There are simply not enough hours in the day to develop skill at every facet of combat. It's very possible that Shoko could defeat a first year even if her opponent exploited her weakness but that doesn't seem you don't have to write what they are down. I had to do a similar thing with Amarant, headmaster of Atlas Academy, one of the strongest fighters the kingdom had ever known backed up by a genius intellect and the best technology available. He still has weaknesses which can be exploited, they aren't as straight forward as first years but they still exist. Being a jack of all trades isn't a weakness, needing ammo isn't a weakness and using your aura for something isn't a weakness. Think about her personality, think about her weapon choices, think about her fighting style and what gaps they would leave in her form.

Character Creation / Re: Sveo Zi-Eun
« on: February 20, 2018, 07:43:38 AM »
Yea nothing that stops me from giving it +1

Character Creation / Re: Garnet Fluss
« on: February 20, 2018, 07:40:30 AM »
What type of faunus is she?

Iíd like you to have another look at your formatting because it is kinda all over the place. Itís fine now but it would also be nice if you could provide a little more detail on the personality and history. What are her experiences at school? What effects did they have on her? ect

You donít have a combat behaviour section and we have already talked about changing the weapon. Formatting could also use some work.

Approved Characters / Re: Billy Bone
« on: February 20, 2018, 07:31:46 AM »
We expect around two to three weaknesses in the combat behaviour but most every this is fine.

Character Creation / Re: Shoko-La Bitter
« on: February 20, 2018, 07:27:50 AM »
So there are a few points I would like some elaboration on; how she kills the heir and her breakdown around her sterilization.

You need actually weaknesses, even for huntsman level characters.

Iím mostly OK with the semblance although having it be able to choke out anyone isnít going to be allowed. Perhaps being able to channel your own aura will dissipate the jelly. Also how much, in rough numbers, of her aura does she need to use to create an effective defense or choking hazard.

Plot Zone / Re: Taking A Bull By The Horns [SIGN-UPS]
« on: February 13, 2018, 05:16:08 PM »
Well I'll throw Ramalia in then because it doesn't look like you are getting teams. Although she is a first year a lot of her abilities lend themselves to a defensive and reconnaissance role.

Teams / First year Vacuo Team
« on: February 13, 2018, 05:12:02 PM »
Well this school exists and Ramalia would like some friends.

An absolute unit Ramalia offers immense long range fire power as well as a life time of hard won survivalist skills to safeguard her team through the treacherous sands of Vacuo.

(Not expecting this to fill up blisteringly fast but felt I should at least try to get the poor girl into a team.)

WiP Characters / Re: Prism Skylark
« on: February 13, 2018, 06:03:43 AM »
This is really really good I only have three nitpicks

  • In the history section you say Ďoutside the borders of veil,í Iím pretty sure you mean Vale.
  • The first emergence of her semblance beating a super powerful threat thing is something we come down pretty hard on so I have to ask you to cut out the pushing the Nevermore back into forest at 12 years. Perhaps she could try to push it back but end up flinging herself back into the forest?
  • I disagree with a lot of your weaknesses being meaningful but you have enough so it doesnít really matter. Being bad while disarmed or relying on your superpower aren't very impactful but being real smoll and bad at reacting is enough.

Character Creation / Re: Sveo Zi-Eun
« on: February 13, 2018, 05:39:18 AM »
We are currently chatting in DMs about this guy but if anyone has anything they would like to add feel free.

Take two at this.


As the chaos around them escalated it became increasingly apparent to Avery that the information being projecting on to the screens around wasn't quite matching up, sonar was showing large and rapidly moving forms not far beneath the waves but the rest of the measurements weren't picking them up. Likewise the surface radar seemed to strangely lag behind real world events. Still moving the the glass to witness what the storm had to offer Avery was treated to a truly spectacular display of colours which almost blinded the scion to new danger before it was too late. Another shard of dust crystal slammed straight into the glass surrounding the bridge and weather through superior design or providence the material held as the crystal deflected off the glass surface. That isn't to say it didn't leave damage, a massive crack had formed at the point of contact and several smaller crystals had been scattered across the glass. Droids have already spilled out from their crevices and started trying to repair/clean the glass but it's slow going and at least for now makes the bridge a poor viewing point.

Dorian's voice croaked through the communication systems, both from variable static and Dorian's own short breath. 'The engine is holding together but she is struggling, I'm not sure if we should move the ship around much to try to keep the engine as stable as possible. The stabilizers also seem to be playing up, I can try to keep us upright manually but it means we will have to keep someone down here unless people want to try swimming to our objective.í Dorian called out, his judging quip not quite managing to cover up the growing fear in his voice.

The stabilisers which Dorian is referring to play a vital role in keeping the ship upright, being a highly automated ship the teamís vessel demands a huge amount of computing power to govern itself. This is only magnified in a storm and as it becomes increasingly apparent something was causing the shipís more advanced systems to go haywire.


Managing to quickly get herself back inside Topaz was treated to a series of bright lights flashing in the distance, too far away to see what exactly was causing them but they lit up an enormous black shape sitting on the ocean's surface. Dashing through the labyrinthine corridors of the ship Topaz also add to navigate past the scuttering droids, going about their business as best they could given the situations and trying to fix any minor damage. Upon calling up Dorian there was a significant pause before the Rothburg scion responded. íIn theory the ships droids should take care of major breaches they just need time. That might not be a luxury we can afford, even if you canít wield the hull close yourself simply halting the influx of water would be greatly appreciated.í Dorian responded, breath still coming quickly as numerous sounds of beeping and switches being flipped could be heard. After a rather loud beep Dorian swore into the still open mic before the line dropping dead.
Rather sheepishly Dorian came back in a few moments later íI would advise Aurum and yourself to meet up, there seems to be something playing up with the systems and we canít afford for everyone to be separated.í Dorian continued with genuine concern in his voice. íThe internal scanners also seem to be playing up unless one of you are trying to sneak up on me.í With that last bit of forced humour Dorian went silent again.

Despite the large distance she had to cover Topaz still made it to the first breach first, the water wasnít filling as much as it could have been as the rock was sealing the hole. Unfortunately the pillar had pieced deep into the side of the wall exposing a series of electronics, luckily rock isnít the most conductive material and there was already the ever present droids trying to close the gap.


Aurum arrives a few minutes after Topaz and after his glib remarks got to work reducing the flow of water. Effectively cutting the flow to near nothing to truly nothing as ice sprouted from the daggers. Covering both the connecting rock and hull in a reasonably thick layer. Unfortunately the drag of the pillar twisted the intrusion and it was already ripping free of itís frozen cage to embed itself deeper into the ship. The rock however seemed it might not be a problem for much longer with Aurums daggers causing small chucks to splinter off and cracks appear in the main rock.

Recognising that the pilots of the ship were taking care of the big intrusion several droids formed themselves in an orderly line beside of Aurum and Topaz waiting for any instructions the hunters-in-training had for them. Dorian and Avery busy with their own tasks silence fell over the ship, even the storm seemed to be letting up as the thunderous belting on the ship hull morphed into a more moderate clanging.

Spoiler: show
(Reading back over Iím not sure if itís clear but everyone can hear what Dorian says over the intercom but not what the others responses are unless they are nearby.)

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